I threw a stone into the pond; it went down without a sound … the ripples like the waves in my heart; after I drowned in her soulful eyes …
p.s: Hey folks I was planning something special double whammy for both my blogs together but couldn't finish it in time. I will be on the move for the next week or so, so until then enjoy the soulful eyes.
18 comments:
Nice and crispy..
you left the raeder to draw his own interpretation..
liked it..
read all the previous ones..
nice, very nice..
wishes..
Hmm, me thinks, you seem to have fallen in love!! God bless
Keep Blogging!!
veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy heart warming!
I threw a stone into the pond; it went down without a sound.. liked it..
I like. :)
Nice post, left me thinking for a while (:
thats a nice style...short crisp and meaningful
beautiful lines.. it left me with a warm feeling..
Returned to blogging after a long break.. to see u changing ur style..
ur thoughts are nice.. but I wud still like to see.. u write poems/songs...as u did before
@Man in Painting: Thanks Yaar, every kind of art should be like that .. the reader should be left to draw their own conclusion ..
Love ... well Sir, I am always in Love ;) .. I keep falling in and falling out and the time gap between them are too small ..:P
But one cardinal truth about us poets/authors .. never believe what we say ... !!
@ Americanizing Desi: Thank You ... I wish the person who was in my mind while writing this also feels so :)...
@Sophie: Thanks ... :)
@Jagjit: Hey welcome ... you said you liked it ... but what in particular ?!
@Komal: Yeah even I was left thinking for a while after I wrote it ... :). But what were you thinking ....?
@Pyaasa Sajal: Thanks ... yeah it short and crisp .. different from what I may usually write .. Keep visiting ... :)
@Pink: Thank you .. compliments from a accomplished blogger is always great !! I am elated to know that it could instigate some emotions in you ..
@Gautam: I am not changing my style .. I just keep on exploring different stuff .. It is also kind of a poem .. more in the Haiku mold rather than conventional poetry ..
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