Monday, March 2, 2009

Every Night ..



“Coming back to Life” I “Wish you were here”…, the notes of Floyd waft past me;
As I try to catch my sleep by counting countless sheep.
Night after night the guitar wails
But still why do I fail, fail to make a song for you in my dreams
To wake every morning and sing ... not scream … !!

28 comments:

sydney said...

seriously dude.... why so dull?

lighten up!!

Som said...

:) .. really .. what should be done to lighten things up ?!

check the other blog .. its surely lighter (at least the colour :P)

Jinxed Pixie said...

hmmm...why so sad???
arre the guitar is wailing because you haven't got it tuned...
:P

Som said...

Once a famous poet said, "poets are the biggest liars" .. :P

Thinking Hat said...

and poets are also the gretatest thinkers :)

americanising desi said...

heyyy you kinda enlightened my blogs :D thanks for the thunder storm!!!

Som said...

@Thinking Hat: Yes poets are also the great thinker ( I won't use greatest; as its too strong !!) but lot of times they create stuff which aren't any reflection of the state of mind they are in ..

Keep visiting !!

Som said...

@americanising desi: Rather I should thank you for maintaining such good blogs .. the advertisement blog takes the cake .. as I am really interested in good advertisement but don't have the time/patience to look out for them on the internet ... The pleasure was all mine ..

Keep enlightening my blogs too :P ..

Sophie said...

The poem is the point at which our strength gave out. Is it?

Som said...

@sophie: point at which our strength gave out ?!! please explain it sophie ...

I think it is when the emotions overflow ...

Onthewingsofadream said...

thanks som for all your comments ...

this painting is haunting ...and the poem touching ...

I agree poets dont neccessary write about whats in the mind /heart ...

Sophie said...

Ya that's what I meant...!!

Som said...

@on the wings of a dream:

Hey please don't thank... the pleasure is all mine .. :)

The painting is haunting and It inspired me to make one with white !!

Hope you listen to Floyd, then you will be able to relate to it more ..

keep visiting .. :)

Som said...

@Sophie: Wow ... thats nice .. By the way I was partially inspired by your two blogs to start a new one :) .. thank you ..

Rahul Viswanath said...

Touched ..... Did hop to read some posts .... Nice Blog Bud !!!

Biju Mathews said...

"..But still why do I fail, fail to make a song for you in my dreams.."

Touchy line!

Keep Blogging!!

Som said...

@Rahul: Thanks bro, keep dropping in ... !!

@Mathews: Yeah true, it is the best line in the poem and was the most easiest to write :P ...

Thanks for commenting .. keep visiting ... !!

Twisted Elegance.... said...

My first visit to your blog

very depressing


I like it

:D

Som said...

@ Twisted Logic: Hello Lover of Russian Babes :P ... Thank you for coming down and keep visiting .. :)

Sophie said...

Oh I didn't know that I even inspire people to do good things... hehe!

pleasure (half) is mine...!! ;)

Som said...

@ Sophie: I heard exactly the same words from a very close friend of mine .. :)

smita said...

i just love this line...
"To wake every morning and sing ... not scream … !!"

anyways as the days go by you become more and more versatile...keep it up
:)

Som said...

Hey Sis, that line has to be good ... as its the stratagem ...


Haha .. yeah one has to .. but have you checked my other Blog ?!

workhard said...

That is depressing.....

Haiku poetry

Som said...

@workhard: ... glad that I could evoke that sentiment from my reader .. that was in a way goal of the poem ..

workhard said...

I had another question, do u actually get to the point where u count countless sheep?

:)

Som said...

@workhard: well frankly this poem hasn't been entirely written from personal experience ...

Touch wood but God has blessed me with sound sleep ... whatever shit I am going through ... I always sleep like a baby ... So.. :)

workhard said...

Thats nice to know:)