Friday, March 20, 2009

Love can Heal and Forgive ...



Last night it rained after a long toil
Releasing the fragrance from the virginal soil
Lulling me to sleep with the pitter patter and the breeze
Making me believe in thou power to heal and forgive …

28 comments:

Self is D only prison tat can ever bind D soul said...

I loved the way in which u put forward such a beautiful thought...but yet in such simple words... awesome...

Som said...

@Self is ... Soul: what a big user name ?! :P

Thank you ... talking about simplicity, any body can make things complex ... you need a genius to make things simple ..

Keep visiting and commenting ... :)

Ali said...

Very nice idea in very nice words, I almost felt like I saw rain last night and felt same thing. Splendid!

Som said...

@Ali: Thanks Ali .. yes a sudden shower gives us such a feeling ..

Keep visiting ... :)

Ankesh Grover said...

i just have one word
Beautiful

Som said...

@Ankesh: Welcome yaar ... thanks :)

Keep following ...

Jagjit said...

Nice one. Dreamy, soothing and nostalgic.

Self is D only prison tat can ever bind D soul said...

som... my user name is just a mirror into what i think....

Nefarious Demon said...

B-E-A-UTIFUL poem!!! ;)

Jinxed Pixie said...

i loved the poem...like all your other ones...
and obviously, i am speechless...
need i say more??
:D

Sophie said...

Amazing..

Loved the pic

I want rain, I want rain now.. :)

Biju Mathews said...

Releasing the fragrance from the virginal soil??

Is this what I should fathom and imagine??? :-)

The poem sounds from the heart!!

Keep Blogging!!

americanising desi said...

ahh the coincidence of great thoughts :D

Som said...

@Jagjit: Thanks .. Soothing .. yes .. rain on the parched earth is soothing but yaar how come nostalgic ?!! :)

Keep visiting ... :)

Som said...

@Self ... Soul: Your user name is the reflection of what you think and your real name is the reflection of what your parents thought ... :) which is better ?!

Som said...

@Nefarious Demon: T-H-A-NK YOU ... :) but would have been great if you would have put in some criticism in your Nefarious style :P

Keep Visiting ...

Som said...

@Jinxed: Hehe .. nope Kiddo you don't need to say more ... other wise you won't be speech less any more ... !! :O

Som said...

@Sophie: :):) .. where are you ... I will ask the hovering clouds to go there ..

Som said...

@Bijju: HA HA ... lolz .. well you are free to imagine anything ... as they say Art should without any constraint and the visualization of the artist and the connoisseur need not be same ... :)

Yes its from the heart as it was raining when I wrote it .. :D

Som said...

@Seher: Hehe .. true the coincidence of great thoughts .. well said .. :D

Sophie said...

In patallok these days, will they manage to come there? ;)

Som said...

I think they will manage just be sure you give the exact address ... :)

Dream'R said...

oh so this is where u ve been hanging!!..thought u went into hibernation or somethin bro...

hey nice stuff...wanna mix it up with mine and we can rap on it..u can do main vocals..i can be the guy who does the antics on stage..wat say? ;-)

Som said...

@Amit: Yaar .. I have kind of .. have worked piled up due to procrastination ... and I am surprised you didn't know about this haven ...

Surely ... It would be a great pair .. Classical rapping .. !!

mahesh said...

its the power of love............
need bpo jobs without a single rupee!!!!!!!! a genuine job from home.

Work from home

Som said...

@Mahesh: thank you for visiting but I don't need a job ... :)

MAN IN PAINTING said...

True..
love can heal anything..

Som said...

Yes Love can heal anything ... :)