Friday, March 27, 2009

Soulful Eyes ...




I threw a stone into the pond; it went down without a sound … the ripples like the waves in my heart; after I drowned in her soulful eyes …



p.s: Hey folks I was planning something special double whammy for both my blogs together but couldn't finish it in time. I will be on the move for the next week or so, so until then enjoy the soulful eyes.

18 comments:

MAN IN PAINTING said...

Nice and crispy..
you left the raeder to draw his own interpretation..
liked it..
read all the previous ones..
nice, very nice..
wishes..

Biju Mathews said...

Hmm, me thinks, you seem to have fallen in love!! God bless

Keep Blogging!!

americanising desi said...

veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy heart warming!

Sophie said...

I threw a stone into the pond; it went down without a sound.. liked it..

Jagjit said...

I like. :)

Komal said...

Nice post, left me thinking for a while (:

Pyaasa Sajal said...

thats a nice style...short crisp and meaningful

the pink orchid said...

beautiful lines.. it left me with a warm feeling..

Gautam Anand said...

Returned to blogging after a long break.. to see u changing ur style..
ur thoughts are nice.. but I wud still like to see.. u write poems/songs...as u did before

Som said...

@Man in Painting: Thanks Yaar, every kind of art should be like that .. the reader should be left to draw their own conclusion ..

Som said...

Love ... well Sir, I am always in Love ;) .. I keep falling in and falling out and the time gap between them are too small ..:P

But one cardinal truth about us poets/authors .. never believe what we say ... !!

Som said...

@ Americanizing Desi: Thank You ... I wish the person who was in my mind while writing this also feels so :)...

Som said...

@Sophie: Thanks ... :)

Som said...

@Jagjit: Hey welcome ... you said you liked it ... but what in particular ?!

Som said...

@Komal: Yeah even I was left thinking for a while after I wrote it ... :). But what were you thinking ....?

Som said...

@Pyaasa Sajal: Thanks ... yeah it short and crisp .. different from what I may usually write .. Keep visiting ... :)

Som said...

@Pink: Thank you .. compliments from a accomplished blogger is always great !! I am elated to know that it could instigate some emotions in you ..

Som said...

@Gautam: I am not changing my style .. I just keep on exploring different stuff .. It is also kind of a poem .. more in the Haiku mold rather than conventional poetry ..