Poems are written, Ships set sail
A face so Exquisite, My breath just fails
A stranger she is, A stranger she will remain
Bringing a faint smile
If I remember her again .....
Note: Image courtesy Danny St.: http://www.flickr.com/photos/dannysantos/
The guy is superb: www.dannyst.com
23 comments:
:) Aaah. We all have those perfect strangers.
And they remain perfect because they are strangers :-)
And they say smiles are contagious.
Keep spreading a few smiles everywhere.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
short n sweet! nice poem!
@BA: I myself have lost my smile somewhere in the last 10 years ...only one that comes to me is a lopsided one .. may be thats why I am sucker for bright smiles ...
I try to spread smiles with my words :-)
@ash89: Thank You !! :D At this point of time writing short poems is the only option I have ... so try to keep it concentrated
a stranger she was :)
very well written :)
Ohhh so nice! I love looking at good looking people hehehe
Strangers...aah...well expressed.
Thanks for dropping by my blog :)
@rainboy: :-) .. yes indeed, strangers are the best ... no history .. no future ..just the moment.
Thank You .. read more, glad that you liked !!
@R: Good looking hmm ... maybe interesting is a better word ;-) .. lot of times there are faces which are arresting but they might not be good looking in a conservative sense ... :-)
@UB: Thank You, the pleasure is all mine. :-)
:) i like the smile
@hey Americanizing Desi: I am glad that you are still blogging :D I have been trying to restart my blogs, and I don't know how successful I will be but It is nice to see some old acquaintances !!!
I love the post :)
Thank you for dropping by! :D
all the best for the new start.. :) strangers are always intriguing esp the beautiful ones..
@Lonley Dreamer: Thank You to you too. :-)
@aria: Thank You and can't agree with you more but what do you mean by Beautiful ?! :-)
Beautiful..short, pithy
Many relationships starts with beautiful smile of stranger, often sadly ends with cry of loved one :)
Profound and beautiful...keep writing, you write fresh!
@Alka: Thanks Alka .. :D
@Palak: I try to write whenever I feel like, some how the frequency has decreased ....
@Amit: That is true, but then that is where lies the beauty of these moments when you never meet the person again .... I love moments with complete strangers ... as it doesn't carry other baggage ... :)
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