Tuesday, November 23, 2010

STRANGER


Poems are written, Ships set sail
A face so Exquisite, My breath just fails
A stranger she is, A stranger she will remain
Bringing a faint smile
If I remember her again ..... 

Note: Image courtesy Danny St.: http://www.flickr.com/photos/dannysantos/
         The guy is superb: www.dannyst.com

23 comments:

Komal Ali said...

:) Aaah. We all have those perfect strangers.

Som said...

And they remain perfect because they are strangers :-)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

And they say smiles are contagious.
Keep spreading a few smiles everywhere.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

ash89 said...

short n sweet! nice poem!

Som said...

@BA: I myself have lost my smile somewhere in the last 10 years ...only one that comes to me is a lopsided one .. may be thats why I am sucker for bright smiles ...

I try to spread smiles with my words :-)

Som said...

@ash89: Thank You !! :D At this point of time writing short poems is the only option I have ... so try to keep it concentrated

rainboy said...

a stranger she was :)

very well written :)

R said...

Ohhh so nice! I love looking at good looking people hehehe

UB said...

Strangers...aah...well expressed.
Thanks for dropping by my blog :)

Som said...

@rainboy: :-) .. yes indeed, strangers are the best ... no history .. no future ..just the moment.

Thank You .. read more, glad that you liked !!

Som said...

@R: Good looking hmm ... maybe interesting is a better word ;-) .. lot of times there are faces which are arresting but they might not be good looking in a conservative sense ... :-)

Som said...

@UB: Thank You, the pleasure is all mine. :-)

Americanising Desi said...

:) i like the smile

Som said...

@hey Americanizing Desi: I am glad that you are still blogging :D I have been trying to restart my blogs, and I don't know how successful I will be but It is nice to see some old acquaintances !!!

♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ said...

I love the post :)
Thank you for dropping by! :D

aria said...

all the best for the new start.. :) strangers are always intriguing esp the beautiful ones..

Som said...

@Lonley Dreamer: Thank You to you too. :-)

Som said...

@aria: Thank You and can't agree with you more but what do you mean by Beautiful ?! :-)

Alka Gurha said...

Beautiful..short, pithy

Amit Joshi said...

Many relationships starts with beautiful smile of stranger, often sadly ends with cry of loved one :)

Palak Vasant said...

Profound and beautiful...keep writing, you write fresh!

Som said...

@Alka: Thanks Alka .. :D


@Palak: I try to write whenever I feel like, some how the frequency has decreased ....

Som said...

@Amit: That is true, but then that is where lies the beauty of these moments when you never meet the person again .... I love moments with complete strangers ... as it doesn't carry other baggage ... :)