tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post2148862646036715979..comments2023-09-12T05:52:40.071-07:00Comments on LIFE: Flower Girl ... Duttahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13239046831537949054noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-51622798157729302009-02-11T22:46:00.000-08:002009-02-11T22:46:00.000-08:00@Nidz: If seen as a poem, the earlier posts were c...@Nidz: If seen as a poem, the earlier posts were certainly better but this is a song; only if I could have put in the tune with the words .. :)Duttahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13239046831537949054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-9279597371370936012009-01-30T02:18:00.000-08:002009-01-30T02:18:00.000-08:00The beauty of a poem is that it is more beautiful ...The beauty of a poem is that it is more beautiful than the poet since it is written in a moment of inspiration, which is ephemeral.<BR/>Your earlier posts were better.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-76317921192745555232009-01-22T22:31:00.000-08:002009-01-22T22:31:00.000-08:00@ Ankita : true ..as I was writing a song it was m...@ Ankita : true ..as I was writing a song it was more kind of necessary to keep the structure; A poem is more unconstrained ... And yes feelings were not constrained ...Duttahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13239046831537949054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-66688116525126980412009-01-22T21:20:00.000-08:002009-01-22T21:20:00.000-08:00I wonder how it would read if you don't make the l...I wonder how it would read if you don't make the lines rhyme.I mean sometimes we bind ourselves in rules and lose some of what we wanted to say.But then you may have written it without feeling constrained.It's certainly possible.Ankitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12537717348481766833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-34923200289366392442009-01-21T14:22:00.000-08:002009-01-21T14:22:00.000-08:00@Paromita : :)@Paromita : :)Duttahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13239046831537949054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-87079103563659537502009-01-20T18:58:00.000-08:002009-01-20T18:58:00.000-08:00But still... I think Boys maintain their stupidity...But still... I think Boys maintain their stupidity when a beautiful gal passes by lolzParomitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04523912364068163967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-73847029070181626922009-01-20T18:57:00.000-08:002009-01-20T18:57:00.000-08:00No Sir , I have cleared my doubts *phew :PNo Sir , I have cleared my doubts *phew :PParomitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04523912364068163967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-4217495204367214302009-01-20T12:27:00.000-08:002009-01-20T12:27:00.000-08:00@sophie: right ... the inspiration can be either b...@sophie: right ... the inspiration can be either be pain or joy but the energy is certainly the energy of love... love for someone, love for nature ... :)<BR/><BR/>@gautam: what made you think I will take it in a wrong stride :PDuttahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13239046831537949054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-41505483004040966742009-01-20T11:32:00.000-08:002009-01-20T11:32:00.000-08:00take it in a positive stride.. but you have just w...take it in a positive stride.. but you have just written a nursery rhyme but for ..grown ups..!! :)Gautam Anandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13142107405039315978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-73991122891960817162009-01-20T10:33:00.000-08:002009-01-20T10:33:00.000-08:00A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of ...A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a love sickness. So it could be anyone...Enchanted Sophiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16456188986979717277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-86210954101104598382009-01-20T09:47:00.000-08:002009-01-20T09:47:00.000-08:00@sophie: What about one sided love ?!I think peopl...@sophie: What about one sided love ?!I think people with a broken heart make better poets ... :)<BR/><BR/>@paromita: well read the line "I can't even stop to sneeze" ... sneezing is kind of an totally involuntary action... so the protagonist of the song is so engrossed in the girl that even an involuntary action can't be performed by him... understood or do I need to elucidate it further? :)Duttahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13239046831537949054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-57173701655408799202009-01-20T09:00:00.000-08:002009-01-20T09:00:00.000-08:00"I can’t even stop to sneeze "why would u want to ..."I can’t even stop to sneeze "<BR/>why would u want to sneeze? I mean who sneezes while seeing a woman ? :PParomitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04523912364068163967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-49981742861471185382009-01-20T07:44:00.000-08:002009-01-20T07:44:00.000-08:00Every heart sings a song, incomplete, until anothe...Every heart sings a song, incomplete, until another heart whispers back. Those who wish to sing always find a song. At the touch of a lover, everyone becomes a poet.<BR/><BR/>Gud one..!!Enchanted Sophiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16456188986979717277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-5097419258637276092009-01-20T05:49:00.000-08:002009-01-20T05:49:00.000-08:00@dev kumar: Thank you .. I am glad you came to vis...@dev kumar: Thank you .. I am glad you came to visit my blog... :)Duttahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13239046831537949054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-91876807171893825.post-73282923010352893942009-01-20T05:16:00.000-08:002009-01-20T05:16:00.000-08:00As per my acknowledge,u r only a thinker who shoul...As per my acknowledge,u r only a thinker who should think about our future and focussed on study but I was wrong.<BR/>U r thinker whether not like the above but u think beyond my imagination which shows your ability of the mind to be creative or resourceful.so keep it up.....<BR/>:)devhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12880754371855593325noreply@blogger.com